by fallen angel Apr 11, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
I sit up on a cliff at night, |
I absolutely loved this poem. I loved the imagery with the wolf. The flow was alittle off in some place, but I liked the way you worded everything. The way you put the words was very interestong. This was very good. Keep up the good work. |
by Kaylee
The wolf imagery is perfect as a symbol and so is the night. The flow is a bit off in places and the repetition constantly reminding us the wolf is alone aslo throws it off a bit. I think this could be good if you want a little more in depth :) 4/5 |
by PS
I like it. the wolf imagery is awesome. some of the flow is a bit off i think. a little rearrangement might improve it. but i like the way it is too. |