GOOD BY

by Dark_shadow0890   Apr 11, 2006


You said you cared about me
So if you care about me
Why are you leaving me
For some you haven't
Seen for four years
I gave you every thing
I treated you with respect
You said you couldn't stop thinking about me
I told you I couldn't stop thinking about you ether
You meant everything to me
I was willing to fight for you
You said I would make a good father
So why are you leaving me
What we had was good
So what if people didn't want us together
Forget them
I loved you
You will always be in my heart
I will never forget you
We will meet again
So don't leave
You made me happy
I told you I wanted to spend the rest of my life with you.
I still do
I love you
But now it's over
We're through
You killed my soul
Broke my heart
Why can't we be happy
But she can
It not fair
Nothing makes sense
Nothing means anything any more
So this is good by.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dark_shadow0890

    Thank u all for your comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    Thank you for commenting on my poem also. I agree with Anita. Keep your head up. Your advice worked from that one comment worked for me. I said I'm sorry. She just hates me for being friends with her b/f. oh well. Things are getting a little better. Thanks again.
    BloomedRose

  • 18 years ago

    by Anita

    Wow that was a really good poem i could really feel the pain that you are in. but keep your head up things will work out for you. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by HisAngel

    Thankx for commenting on my peom.....and this is really good....

  • 18 years ago

    by Kimberly Anne

    Wow.... thats a really like touching poem. and its really good.