by fallen angel Apr 11, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Loss is like an echo, |
by Kaylee
It seemed deep and more detailed. I didn't care much for that sentence with the exclaimation point as it seemed to accuse and shout. But other than that it was a lot better than your other one. 5/5 |
by PS
Oh that so good. my favorite line is the one with the mole. it is an deep sad poem. nice job |