Cool theme, different and good, keep writing :P

Beautiful & touching! brilliant piece... I just read your profile... and you have a daughter, wow darlin... that's amazing, how old now?

heidi

Cute poem ...keep workin at them!

This is an awesome poem it relates so much to everyone we all wait for our man to cum to us while sittin in our own little castels

I have read all of your poems and i loved everyone of them u speak from the heart i like that about ur writting keep up the good work

Awww so so so true. few words that mean a lot. i like where you are headed with it. keep it up :D
meg