When He Left

by Lauren   Apr 11, 2006


He told her
"It's Over"
And her heart just stopped.
She couldn't believe it.
She DIDN'T believe it.

All of those times
when he held her late at night.
All of those memories
of waking up with him beside her.
She didn't think she'd be able
to go to bed at night
with him not there.
She didn't think she'd be able
to make it on without him.

But she's doing everything
she said she'd never do.
She's meeting new guys,
doing new things.
She's doing everything,
he said she could never do.
She's everything,
he said she'd never be.

She's everything
she ever wanted
to be
all along.
And it all started
when he left.

*hm...i really don't like this poem. but oh well...

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  • 18 years ago

    by alana

    But i really like it....
    its soo true to your stuck with someone who you think is the one when thers so many more guys out there that are gonna treat you right un like so mayother
    keep your head up things will get better

  • 18 years ago

    by ~world~of~perfect~lies~and~honest~eyes

    Hey, thankyou for leaving a comment on my poem. you poem kinda sound like what i am going through too. he told me that i could be in his arms forever, we had so many dreams of waking up next to each other. thats all the will ever be though, dreams...

  • 18 years ago

    by Dan Bloom

    ITS ABOUT TIME!!!!!! jeez lol yea you shouldnt be emo dude you are way better then that and so is this poem! duude k i love the poem and it seems you must like it too...cuz it feels good to say things like that if they are really true...i just wish i could say the same thing...for myself when i left her...meh w/e lol all i can do is hope for the best but you....you can make the best happen for yourself and youre doing it by getting over him! yesssssssssss good job!!!

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