Unknown

by Jacob Perry   Apr 11, 2006


Serotonin running from my head down to the floor
I wander through the day again but never walk strait through that door
I hate myself more than any of you ever really guessed
But i guess that just the price of never having rest
I'm terrified to be awake, alone, alive
I think that if I don't crack soon then I shall surely die
No one sees the bloodshot eyes or the slitted skin
But i know that what I'm doing has to be a sin
On and on i walk through life until that fateful day
Mother walks into the room with nothing left to say
At least a week I laid there with my death unknown
I guess that no one truly cared Thats what I'm finally shown
but ill take this life of death rather than that throne
It's funny how the years have past and no one still has shown
But alas it's over now and i finally have a home

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  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Awesome poem, from beginning to end. Brilliant start. Nice rhymes as well. Keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Yeah, deep, emotional, powerful, very well written and flows well. keep it up
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Omg this was such a good poem. Its very deep & emotional. great job!! 5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very well written greatt use of vocab and expression thoughout

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Heyya,
    This was really good..My favourite part had to be "I guess that no one truly cared That what I'm finally shown
    but ill take this life of death rather than that throne
    It's funny how the years have past and no one still has shown
    But alas it's over now and i finally have a good home"

    I actually read it over and over..It was a great sad ending!!
    I loved your words you used really made the poem powerful!! Great work, I really enjoyed it x

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