Oooh, a pleiades...FANCY! Lol!

"Scrapping to get off"
"scrapping them clean"

I think you meant *scraping. Just without the extra "p". =P

Oh, and i hate it when i'm in a rush to get cleaned up for school and i find toothpaste smeared on the corners of my mouth and all on my shirt. Ha.

Take care!

//Ari\\

Very cute poem! I love how you multi-tasked by writing a poem that fits two challenges, I'm so envious :)
You describe toothpaste beautifully. I could actually taste the spearmint as I read this....lol.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

A great style that you have just inspired me to try out! Wonderful poem, I love the way you described the toothpaste, reminded me of aquafresh multi whitening! Take care..
xxxxxx

This poem is pretty darn cool! hecks yeah! toothpaste is very annoying at times, great work with the poem! 5/5 fo' sho' (cuz i'm just that good i can talk like that...jkjkjkjkjk!)