Betrayal

by fallen angel   Apr 11, 2006


I would never cheat on you,
I would never play around.
A party is never a party without you around.

I just don't know if I could live this life if you ever had a doubt.

Please don't give up baby.

Yesterday.
Today.
And forever more.
I am your always.

For your love there is no cure.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    Ok so I don't have a clue why someone would give this poem a 1 rating... I really hope you get the rating up from decent voters. It's very heartfelt. I love poems that don't have to rhyme for the sake of rhyming.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I agree but even the first stanza didn't fit with the rhyme. The last line of it seemed forced. Maybe organize a bit, write it on paper, read it aloud, and see what could be done :)

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    I really like the 1st stanza. the rest seems to be a bunch of thoughts put down. maybe rearranging it a bit

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