by LadyPearl Apr 11, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Smeared across the lonely walls |
by Bridgette
Wow! such a beautiful poem! the flow was amazing & it was very descriptive. great job! 5/5* |
Awesome job, as usual! Wow. That is so deep, Noni. |
Again I am thrown off in surprise by your ability to manipulate words and you skill at filling each letter with large drops of emotion and feeling. Your images always are a great aid to the beauty of your poetry, as the are again in this poem. You start was brilliant, with the comments about bloody kisses; it provided a good hook to the rest of your poem. Nice job love. |