Again I am thrown off in surprise by your ability to manipulate words and you skill at filling each letter with large drops of emotion and feeling. Your images always are a great aid to the beauty of your poetry, as the are again in this poem. You start was brilliant, with the comments about bloody kisses; it provided a good hook to the rest of your poem. Nice job love.

-Tainted Mikochan

Awesome job, as usual! Wow. That is so deep, Noni.

Wow! such a beautiful poem! the flow was amazing & it was very descriptive. great job! 5/5*