Dear diary

by Sorefromreality   Apr 12, 2006


Dear diary,
what is it that i cannot seem to grasp? am i just another poor soul that has come to pass? lately I've been very stressed. so this i will confess... no one can take his place, and no one has his face. i cant find anyone i love as much, i wish one last time i had his touch. why must i hold in all my tears? why can't i release these pent up fears? i feel so low, i can't get up again. i am being dragged down by the memory of him. no one understands what could possibly be so wrong. i have been faking my happiness for so long. i seem okay, but inside i am a wreck, waiting to fall, trying to call, hoping for death instead i get breath. i am telling you and only you this because anywhere else, i just can't confess. free me of this pain in my heart, make me fresh, give me a new start. but please keep my secrets, they are very deep. my emotions run very steep. i will not lie, but nor will i cry, tonight may be, the night i die.

~sore

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  • 18 years ago

    by Moose

    You have a lot of great works on here. Some wont let me comment cause it logs me out but nonetheless this was amazing also. Deffinitly one of my fav authors now.

  • 18 years ago

    by lonelynow

    It's really really good. i really like this poem! it's so deep- so emotional!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Nice. I tried to go as deep as i could on my poem but it's hard. I'm working on one right now and it seems empty. But i like the way you go deep deep down in your poems. Nice job. 5/5
    -Vino

  • 18 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    "Free me from this pain in my heart,make me fresh,give me a new start.but please keep my secrets,they are very deep.my emotionsrun verysteep.i will not lie,but nor will i cry,tonight may be,the night i die"..i just wnna tll u tht ur poem expressed somthings i feel inside..it really touched me deeply..ur words were so strong and sad..especially the last ones..great work..5/5..
    thxx 4 ur comment..

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

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    Friends,
    Ashley

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