by Sean Dohr Apr 12, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
My bleeding, dying heart, |
I would have to say the structure is well thought out. The flow and Ryhme, well there really isn't any. It was a great emotional peice that was very easy to read. |
by Clarissa
I know how you feel on this one and how these things can hurt so much... and the last stanza i can very much relate to keep it up ;] |
by Jackie Marie
I think that the structure of the poem is awesome and very neat. I like it alot. It is full of emotion and shows how the person REALLY feels. Nothing left out. Good job. 5/5 |
by Allison
I liked the rhyme scheme behind this one too. You are a really talented poet and you should keep up the good work. 5/5 |
by Adriana
Oooo this poem is sad but you will find the one sometime in your life...really good poem |