by Allison Apr 12, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Eyes that sparkle |
by Marc Ortiz
It was a good poem for your first love poem. Anyway I have a suggestion to improve this piece :) Try to use punctuations. Nonetheless it was a great though I wish it was longer :) |
by Blissful
I loved this! It was real easy for me to relate with it and the images you described were heartwarming. Beautiful love poem *5/5* |
by Nigel Oliver
I love this poem! |
by Boy
I need you to love me |
Aww. i thought this was really sweet. you did really good! well done huni |