Giving Up On You, Kid

by JustAFoolInLove   Apr 12, 2006


I can’t imagine what’s in your head
If you need attention, or you want to be dead
But choices like these are not ones to make
You seem empty, now, but even more, fake
You never acted so careless before
You took the chance and opened the door
And now you’re leaving us all behind
Just to look for something you’ll never find
Because everything you need is here
It’s in everything you ever held dear
So turn around, love, take us back
Before we become something you’ll always lack
You’re losing us so goddamn fast
And you don’t seem to care about the past
You see how sick we are of this game
Everything’s falling, kid, and you are to blame
So take back the promises you’ve already broken
And forget all the loving words that I’ve ever spoken

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  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    OMFG!!!!!! LMFAO!! You can't be serious......they actually deleted that poem???

    how do you know??
    Gahh i'm so confused. You WROTE that poem....and if they thought you really plagarized something, i thought that they suspend the account or basically delete it..like they did with Hailie....

    Geese...i'm so sorry...

    I can email Janis (the owner of the site) for you if you want....i don't know what good that'll do but Janis is the one who does all the suspending/deleting and all of that jazz.

    Gahh..i'm so sorry. Who said that you copied it from them?! WHERE would you have copied it from?!?!?!

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Uumm..

    uhhhhhhhhh.....

    I love it, yeah, but reading it...I definetely felt the blow of all of it. Each time i read it, it always seems to feel like you're talking to me and I don't know how you do it, but its the uncertainty that drives me mad.

    Also, i love how you gave it your own touch too. You told me how you say "bud" and "kid" often, so the title is right in your ball park! XD

    Lots of love, Zac.

    If all of my comments on your poetry hasn't shown that I TRULY believe you are one of the BEST poets on this site, I don't know what will convince you. But pleaaase, continue to write. Somehow, reading whats on your mind sustains me. It actually interests me. And without really asking you personally, it tells me how you're doing. I love it!!

    PLEAAAAAAASE keep writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    I like it... good write, nice style!

    Car

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    ....Ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuch.
    This poem is....strong,...i think that's how to describe it. I can't pretend that I know who you're talking about, but I hope you're okay. I hope whatever is happening works out for you.

    I'm always here if you need me! XD

    Nice poem. Some of the things in it kinda felt like you were talking to me. But that's just what makes a good poem, lol.

    You're amazing. XD

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