She Would

by ღHazel_Kittenღ   Apr 12, 2006


Every day she See's his face
Memories she must retrace
Of how he reached and touched her heart
Performing an almost perfect art

For a month and three weeks they were together
Through the coolest of weather
Then another came along
And this is where it all went wrong

They had been so close until then
So much time together they'd spend
But that girl came and stole her life
Now she lives a life in strife

She sees them as their holding hands
She sees they travel the land
and she cries every time deep inside
Until her feelings no more will hide

She almost dies to see his face
To feel his touch, to know his race
But now he's gone and she would cry
If only she could had she not died

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Excellent, the flow was knocked a little at points, and the repetition of some words, like life, in the same stanza made them lose their impact a little. However, the rhyming was excellent, and the poem's meaning was really good - great piece.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreaming_Awake

    Awwwwwwwwwww very sad made me wanna give you big huggles and kisses lol yeah but it was a great one and i did love it and do i need to go kick his ass for ya cause ill break a nail lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was really good, The flow of it was perfect, Though I think there is a mistake in the very last line;
    "If only she could had she not died"
    I don't really understand that, It just doesn't make sense. But anyways, This was a brillant poem, I loved it, Keep it up hun x-x

  • 18 years ago

    by cassie

    Hun i love this poem it is so touching and you really express your emotions through your words, please comment on some of mine it would be most appreciated, and if u ever need to tlak im here
    love cass xoxo

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