An interesting way to look at things, I really liked this. Especially at the end, when you mention how the apple core will be able to grow a new plant. Very nice.

This was wonderful, made me think twice about apple cores...I can just picture one now dancing in the rain..*hehe*...you really brought this one to life...excellent.

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Aww lovely poem, if not a little obscure . . .

You definetly changed the way i see an apple core..you made it sound so beautiful...oh and you entered it in my contest...

Definatly different. great job! i love the ending

Different, interesting and good. well done

:) this poem is so innocent, its a great reflection of how simple things in life are taken for granted!

-biscuit-

Wow. I would never have looked at an apple core like that before.

Apple cores are never the same
Individuals, red or green
They way they're bitten determines the frame
Eye-like pips that stare, but never see

I particularly liked this stanza although the whole thing was beautifully written.
You show an amazing talent of perspective. Keep it up.