You know i think ur poetry is 'I'ncredible. Your imagery is always so 'L'ovely. it's a bit 'O'bscene in parts, but that's coz you're 'V'ehement.

The sadness and simplicity is 'E'xtroardinary. Although it's abotu a portrait, it's also very 'D'eep. again, your literature skills are 'I'mpressive. All up it's 'T'errific.

Now take only the letters with the apostrophe around it, then it will make sense.

Well done. Rock on
-Suzie

Well done! very artistic!

Great peice, very clearly written with fantastic imegry

Good job! this piece has some awsome imagery and clever wordplay. i particularly like the the fourth stanza. again, good job!

take care - hannah

Omg. I dont even no what to say. I loved it. Amazing.:D

WOW. WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW. You are my new hero. Jeeze, ur frikken amazing.
Anyways, your comment made me all happy inside. The same to you, about everything.

lotsa love,
*Butterfly

Wow gr8 work...very emotional 5/5...i like ur way of wordin things

This one deserves nothing less than a 5.

"Smoke inbeds her chest,
Flames eat away her neck,
Portrayed perfection,"

I fcuking loved the visual that these lines gave me. It was unreal. 5/5 =]

-Jenna.