Stupid thoughts

by anonymous one   Apr 12, 2006


Have you ever had the feeling that makes u wanna cry,
where u dont want to live but u don't want to die?.
its all to much and your hearts in despair,
you don't want to consume anymore of this air.
this could tear u apart or make u man,
these are the voices that don't understand.
what was my last thought that caught my breathe,
one lethal dose of crystal meth.

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  • 18 years ago

    by SingleWing

    Really good! Thanks for the comment btw. I see what you feel. But when you use short hand, it takes away from the poem, lol. GREAT JOB otherwise 4/5!!!! :-)

  • 18 years ago

    by Infected with His Deadly Love

    Great poem, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Fay

    Good rythm ;) i loved it

  • 18 years ago

    by Sammib

    *sniff sniff* In truth its sad that people actually feel like this at times.. but if there is one thing I keep coming across on this site its that ppl are going through the same things as each other. And they see things from different views. Thank you for sharing your views. Loved reading this.

    Godbless
    Sammib

  • 18 years ago

    by Colton

    Not a bad Poem, pretty good, keep up the good work :)

    god bless

    Colt

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