This is really deep and i like it. you did a really good job and you really need to keep on writing.

Hey your poems do not suck they really speak to me and i really love them

Thats a good poem! i know i can relate too....i did the same thing....it will all get better eventually!
amnda

WOW READ A FEW OF YOUR POEMS. THEY ARE ALL GOOD, BUT THIS ONE REALLY MADE ME THINK. YOU HAVE PUT SO MUCH IN SUCH A SHORT POEM WHICH MAKES IT BRILLIANT.
KELLY
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WOW READ A FEW OF YOUR POEMS. THEY ARE ALL GOOD, BUT THIS ONE REALLY MADE ME THINK. YOU HAVE PUT SO MUCH IN SUCH A SHORT POEM WHICH MAKES IT BRILLIANT.
KELLY
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