Eternity

by zoe   Apr 12, 2006


You love me, you hate me,
It changes everyday.
I love you, I love you,
In every single way.

You're here with me, your there with her,
Will you make up your mind.
I'm here for you, I'm here for you,
With a love of every kind.

You kiss me, you beat me,
You think its just fine.
I hug you, I hug you,
Ill be here till the end of time.

Your with me, you killed her,
Will you do the same to me.
I'm with you, I'm with you,
Ill have to wait and see.

You touch me, you stabbed me,
You've caused me so much pain.
I love you, I love you,
You left me lying in the rain.

Now you love me, now you want me,
But I don't feel the same.
I shot you, I killed you,
Now I'm playing the game.

Its over, its over,
Your gone forever now.
You haunt me, your in my dreams,
You still bother me somehow.

I did it, I did it,
I killed myself too.
I'm here now, I'm here now,
To spend eternity with you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Thats interesting. wasnt really expecting that to happen. nice job though!

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Woooowza. This hit me straight on. The impact of this poem is amazing and loved the way you constructed it. There were patterns within patterns. The words had a haunting effect....there was so much emotion and intensity. I was not expecting the twist at the end....dare I say it sounded life like....this is simply AWESOME....keep writing...all the best...

    [lostlaureate - come find me]