Feeling good?

by zoe   Apr 12, 2006


Slamming doors,
Closing hearts,
Angered words,
The tears start.

Love and hate,
Hope and despair,
Soft touches and hugs.
Theres no one to care.

Stomping feet,
Hurting thoughts,
Pounding fists,
Love cant be bought.

Light and dark,
Happy and sad,
Sharp knives and razors.
Its all so bad.

Locked doors,
dripping blood,
swirling dreams,
It feels so good.

Live and die,
Struggle and give up,
Feeling so low,
Just want to feel good.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Wow...i really enjoyed it...it was weird...but i loved it...
    Emma 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Nice structure and rhyme...i liked it.

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