Little meanings

by TinaMarie   Apr 12, 2006


Things of this world are only temporary
Pleasures for now aren't worth the hurry
To give in to the flesh is so selfish of me
Not thinking of the man that died on Mt.Calvary

Tomorrows not promised and I've never seen today
So I should watch what i do and what i say
Obeying the commandments is just the surface of things
Theres deeper depths and higher heights to living this dream.

please rate and comment this is the first poem I've written on here.
thanx

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  • 18 years ago

    by His Firecracker

    Hey! this is really good! u should write more.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren

    Wow...this is a good first poem. If this is good, I can't imagine what your work will be like after you've been writing for a while...
    5/5
    lauren

  • 18 years ago

    by Genna

    I really liked your poem. Your a good writer and I look forward to seeing more of your work.

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