by Rican Chemistry Apr 12, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I have fallen for you |
by Spanish Star
Oh this was so great, I loved this poem. But some how its kind of different from what you usually write. I loved the ending, gave me chills. Great job. Keep it up ;) |
by cLumsy
Everything is a pure world of love, delight, and passion, and then it falls into a world of sorrow, where one loves, but loves one-sided. Heart-fulfillingly touching. |
by Sarah Ann
Wow this was excellent, I love how you worded it in a unique way. That is what makes poetry so special, everyone has their own heart striking style to attract their readers...you do well with that. Keep it up! Take care xxx |
by dora
Hey darl havent red ur p0emz in a while. h0pe u been g0od. this was really t0uchign and heartfelt piece. beautifully w0rded. g0od j0b. keep em c0ming |
by dora
Hey darl havent red ur p0emz in a while. h0pe u been g0od. this was really t0uchign and heartfelt piece. beautifully w0rded. g0od j0b. keep em c0ming |