Heyyy,missed ur poems
that was a good one but not like the others*forgive me for being honest* I gave it a 4/5..just I felt that wasnt ur way in expressing wut u feel..or maybe it was ME who didnt get the point or how it came from ur heart
sorry again :P
Keep up the GR8 work*u r still gr8 tho ;)*
Luv Ya Gal
NemO x0x0x0x0x

Hey darl havent red ur p0emz in a while. h0pe u been g0od. this was really t0uchign and heartfelt piece. beautifully w0rded. g0od j0b. keep em c0ming

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

Hey darl havent red ur p0emz in a while. h0pe u been g0od. this was really t0uchign and heartfelt piece. beautifully w0rded. g0od j0b. keep em c0ming

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

Wow this was excellent, I love how you worded it in a unique way. That is what makes poetry so special, everyone has their own heart striking style to attract their readers...you do well with that. Keep it up! Take care xxx

Everything is a pure world of love, delight, and passion, and then it falls into a world of sorrow, where one loves, but loves one-sided. Heart-fulfillingly touching.

Oh this was so great, I loved this poem. But some how its kind of different from what you usually write. I loved the ending, gave me chills. Great job. Keep it up ;)