Sudden Darkness

by melly xx   Apr 12, 2006


Trying to get out.
troubled, lost, confused.
tears of blood, streaming down, blurring her vision.
agony,pain, fighting.
alone, cold, looking.
for what?
a place, anywhere.
safe, away from here.
why?
beatings, cursing, rape.
scars on her body,
never letting her forget.
he's coming for her
shell never be free
waiting...
her feet mover faster
as his are too
anyone to turn to?
no
he's closer, holding a knife
he screams, she kneels down and prays
a blow in the head....
sudden darkness

© MLS

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  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww hunny. I'm so sorry if this is true. It sounds horrible, and you put so much into this. Even if you didn't notice it. =P

    I didn't so much like the flow in this one. It was alright, but could be improved. And I think you could add a little more description into it. Just some suggestions. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Girl this is soo good! i love your poems! you write real good!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovesick 4 Jesus

    I am sooo sooo sorry hunni...i wish i could just wrap you in a big warm hug an dnever let you go.

    your not alwyas alone hun...god is there, even when it migh not feel like it...hes there

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