I am sooo sooo sorry hunni...i wish i could just wrap you in a big warm hug an dnever let you go.

your not alwyas alone hun...god is there, even when it migh not feel like it...hes there

Girl this is soo good! i love your poems! you write real good!

Aww hunny. I'm so sorry if this is true. It sounds horrible, and you put so much into this. Even if you didn't notice it. =P

I didn't so much like the flow in this one. It was alright, but could be improved. And I think you could add a little more description into it. Just some suggestions. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha