Back to Reality

by melly xx   Apr 12, 2006


That little girl,
in a blue dress with yellow frills.
Running in the fields of poppies, bluebells, buttercups. A smile sprouts on her face
the flowers smell of honey and sweets that give you a little taste of heaven.
the wind blows her golden locks across her face, only causing her to giggle.
the sun warming the flowers, waking them up and giving them life.
she spots one noticeable flower.
A rose. a dead rose.
she picks it out of the ground and everything goes dark.
All the flowers, dead.
The sun, gone.
the fields, overshadowed by darkness.
her dress is gone, replaced with stained pants and an old filthy shirt. her hands covered in blood, and the stench of trash fills her nostrils.
Her hair is messy and tangled.
Tears pour out of her eyes when she hears screams coming from her house. Her dad had another bad day at work and comes outside to where she is standing. He calls her name, and she notices a beer bottle in his hand, and a smile on his face.
Back to Reality.

© MLS

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  • 17 years ago

    by endless tears

    This was a good poem nice..
    good job..
    well comitt me back or what ever..

  • 18 years ago

    by InterviewWithTheKat

    LOVE IT!!!
    so deep.
    keep up the good work
    (thanks for the comment)!!!
    kat-x-

  • 18 years ago

    by Perfectly Unperfect

    Wow. Very different than the last two poems of yours that I read. This poem has so much depth, emotion, and truth. I really enjoy your poetry. It's always great to find a poet who can write in so many versatile moods with such excellence. Great job, really.

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww hunny. This really gave me an insight on life. And how hard some people take it. This made tears come to my eyes it was so touching and sad =(

    Your writing though was superb. You did an excellent job with the descriptions and emotion that you displayed in this one. It made me feel as if there are people in this world that don't have it as well as others. Very good job. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    This is a well-written, painful, very bad dream poem.....