Wow......that made me cry

Woh! It was a very touching poem. It made we whant to cry! 5/5 ^_^

Omg this is a very good poem... it made me think about how reality sucks!!! lol well ya loved it!

Girl this poem describes something like my life i think that you are a writer like myself you write reality and not what other people write to fit in keep writing you have talent

It's beautifull, I saw it like a film before my eyes and made me think about my own life.

AWH, Thats so sad. It gave me chills. Im speechless. It was to wonderful for words. Well done.!!

This poems is one that needs to rhyme to catch the readers attention. Good ideas though!

Another good poem! very sad too!

This is a well-written, painful, very bad dream poem.....

Aww hunny. This really gave me an insight on life. And how hard some people take it. This made tears come to my eyes it was so touching and sad =(

Your writing though was superb. You did an excellent job with the descriptions and emotion that you displayed in this one. It made me feel as if there are people in this world that don't have it as well as others. Very good job. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow. Very different than the last two poems of yours that I read. This poem has so much depth, emotion, and truth. I really enjoy your poetry. It's always great to find a poet who can write in so many versatile moods with such excellence. Great job, really.

LOVE IT!!!
so deep.
keep up the good work
(thanks for the comment)!!!
kat-x-

This was a good poem nice..
good job..
well comitt me back or what ever..