Short and sweet, a lot of thought has gone into such a simple thing and it makes a great poem, well done

Beautiful!! This is a wonderfully written poem. I thoroughly enjoyed this write, so simple yet so beautifull conveyed.

Wow, if I hadn't read the title I wouldn't have known that it was actually a straw. Sounded more like the fountain of youth or something, very nice!
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Very good peice, quite amazing how you could write such a poem about soemthing as everyday as a straw. you wrote this very well, it has obviosly had a lot of thought put into it and it really shows.

5/5

Lmao i love how you glorified somethings as simple as a straw hahah. the imagery was surprisingly good too