Wow... A master piece!! I wasn't expecting this poem to be so damn powerful and have such a deep and solid meaning. I knew it was a good idea and would make a good poem, but this is beyond what I could have imagined. I really enjoyed this poem. The flow was outstanding and the truths inside are just so eye opening. If any of the youngsters out there don't actually take note of this poem, well it will explain a hell of a lot. I admire your writing this poem.

Amazing. im sending my friend this poem, because she is one of those people with now uncommon courtesy. AMAZING

Hmmmm twisties sis *drools*
I agree Chelsey Im not a big collaborative writer as you can tell but writing with you my titta was a true pleasure we went off on a crazy tangent and I think it resulted in something beautiful - a great write for us both and it was a true joy to work with you. We did write it uniquely but I enjoyed it rather than writing tit for tat - thanks babes you continue to be my inspiration - Love you Eirisa

I'm quite impressed at how thorough you both were. You covered so many different types of rude behavior and did so in such an eloquent manner. Very nice!
I've wondered these thoughts many times. I always say bless you when someone sneezes. Oh and I'm very quick to say excuse me or sorry when I nearly mow someone down with my cart at the store. But I've noticed that I don't get any of that in return...it's really a sad thing.
Anyway, well done on the poem! Take care and keep it up~Holly

Wow...that was a strong worded poem. Flow was off every now and then but that doesn't matter. The content is what matters for this. Well done. Great for that and excellent thoughts.
~S3I -Faith

It's very different. A very good theme & both you've done a wonderful job!

Chelsey and Eirisa that poem is so true. Being older than most of the club members, I can definitely remember the days of polite society. Good Job.

How Beautiful! I loved it! I wish I had your talent!!!

What a beautiful poem. A wonderful topic to write about and you wrote lovely. wonderful job.

Woah i look up to you, that was powerful, keep it up!

~Hayley~

I really like this and it is really true!
keep it up!
give ur sis props too!

Totally true. thanks for writing this poem. its about time someone took a stand and sais whats wrong in the world (and people listen)

To you both, this is an amazing piece. I really loved it. It is a sad condition the world is in today. If only everyone would apply the counsel in the Bible. right? Incredible Job! Jpoet*

Wow, this is truly a great poem. You and your sister did an amazing job, you should consider writing more poems like that one! Fantastic! =)

x.xBrokenx.x

I like your poems but i was wondering how do you get those hearts on there because i wanted to do it tooo!

Hahaha this actually made me laugh :D i loved it! so true as well!

A very interesting and thoughtful write. One I can relate to as I agree completely. Well done.