Clock Stopper

by Million Tears   Feb 3, 2004


This is probably the crappiest poem i wrote so far. but this is how i feel for her:

*~@Clock Stopper@~*

I fell in love with you,
You said you loved me too.
You make my world go by so fast,
I thought it would forever last.
I thought I would spend forever,
With you by my side together.
But now that you're gone,
The nights are so long,
The days are so sad,
Without the love that we had.
I can't put you in the past,
Our love went by to fast.
As days turn to years,
Alive come all my fears.
You didn't have to go,
My life is so slow.
Now I'm on my knees,
Begging you please,
Stay with me today,
This pain won't go away.
Then maybe by tomorrow,
We'll forget all the sorrow.
Am I wasting my time?
I can't make you mine.
If I can change the past,
I'd make our love last.
Now let's go back in time,
To the days you were mine.
Let's undo the past,
And make our love last.
Take back the heart,
That you shattered apart.
Undo the pain,
from the noting we gained,
We'll go back to that night,
And set things right.
Love me again,
Don't just pretend.
Cause after all we've been through,
I know this much is true;
I'll always love you.

*~@Dedicated to my lost love@~*

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*~@8渀~*

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  • 20 years ago

    by nikki

    great as usual, as everyone else said, definitely not crappy, i wish a guy loved me this much!!! your a great poet with alotta talent. i love all your stuff.

  • 20 years ago

    by ~:.GodeSsOfTemPtati0n.:~

    not crappy =) its nice =) well written =) hope u can stop by mine and read "THE OBJECT" and "DESTINY(HER SUICIDE NOTE) thanx =)

  • 20 years ago

    by Nicole Kinder

    your poems are very well written, good job. I can tell you love to write because i all of your poem you can sense the emotion spilling through it...good job, 5 stars

  • 20 years ago

    by Kristina K

    Another heartfelt piece of poetry. Oh, and you say it's crappy? Well, let me tell you now that this poem is definitely not crappy. You have talent and I thank you for taking the time to share it with us. You do a fine job in transferring your emotions into words and phrases. Keep up the wonderful work and take care.
    Kristina