If you can't tell, this poem is very emotional to me. Please vote/comment on it. Thanks in Advance.

He will forgive us from our fall
Do you mean from or for?

This poem was really emotional and the word choice was amazing. I think the start of the poem was the strongest and it did seem a bit weak in the middle. Still great just not as strong. The message is a good one. I really did like your poem. I don't know if it should be more in the life/society ones under inpsiration than this. But who knows, maybe your poems will inspire people. This onw asn't bad at all.

What passion you have in this writing. I mean wow! 5/5