New love blossoms

by Jacob Perry   Apr 13, 2006


As i trudged through the sea of rage
i looked around trapped in a cage
then my eye did spy a mage
whom smelled of peppermint and sage

I saw her there, and the water clear,
then the bars disolved away
I knew then she would be most dear
and now shes haunts me day to day

and with pride i walk to her without fear
to the one i hold so dear
with relinquished years
and now relinquished fears

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Again, a lovely poem. I love your work so far. keep it up
    xxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by jello

    This is good...good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jon Hunt

    I do like this and i understand what it is saying, in particular the second stanza i feel most strongly, its a wonderful representation of how that meeting that special person feels.
    All in all a great poem, lets see if we can up that rating!

    Cheers, Jon

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I'm not sure if I got the message but the wording was beautiful and strong. Not the ordinary words in some parts which I loved.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Great job on this. its really good. i liked the rhyme scheme & the way you worded it. great job! 5/5*

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