Great job on this. its really good. i liked the rhyme scheme & the way you worded it. great job! 5/5*

I'm not sure if I got the message but the wording was beautiful and strong. Not the ordinary words in some parts which I loved.

I do like this and i understand what it is saying, in particular the second stanza i feel most strongly, its a wonderful representation of how that meeting that special person feels.
All in all a great poem, lets see if we can up that rating!

Cheers, Jon

This is good...good job.

Again, a lovely poem. I love your work so far. keep it up
xxxxxxx