O.M.G.
Your vocabulary is friggin amazing. And I"m jealous. LOL!! I dont know what HALF the words in that mean...but they sound good. ;-)

AWSOME!!!!!

I agree ^^ The vocab used in this poem is great - and everything slots into place so perfectly. Very well done.

Peace. [Sole]

It appeared to me like a broken friendship poem, like someone was lying to you...
I loved the last line it was incredible...inspired!
You are talented..keep writing :D:D