Gr8 poem...i like the ending:)

Its unfortunate that some of us are left with the broken heart and the unanswered questions that you wrote..it's like were left to blame ourselves trying to figure out if the happiness that was once shared was worth all the pain and tears...there's a fine line between happiness and sadness so its hard to say. Well done hun I really like the line "I guess this is as good as it gets"

-Kayla

I like this poem it was gr8 oh and thanx for the comment on my poem

I love this. I can relate to it so much. Especially the 8th stanza. Great job on this! 5/5

This poem reminds me so much of the one person I've tried so many times to forget. It's a really great poem.
Pamela

Another great poem and that is exactly why you are on my list of favorites. lol. 5/5

I'm speechless. you've got talent! keep it goin..

Beautiful... i am almost crying riht now... I know this feeling I know this palce... Once i was told "what if" would be my last words... May i die with this on my mind, because i would scream these questions to another, but it would be in vain... 5/5

I like your poem al lot.. keep it up

Amazing.. the ending did it for me =]
xx

This is a excellent poem! i love it

can i suggest u change the "We were once again blocked by a wall" to we were once again blocked by walls" or somethin it will help it flow

but regardless i love the idea behind it.. i can really relate to it! keep it up! X

It left me speechless, and thought abt it for a second and I went ahead to comment your poem, L:-DL but i Love the ending.... you got good talent!

This was great! very emotional very pure.

What if I told you, you broke my heart
Would you even care
Or would that just be another thing
You leave for my heart to bare???

i really liked that stanza. it stuck out the most. you got yer message across perfectly. a great ending. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

I like this poem it's really great and totally relatable

All I can say is ... Sounds like a part of my past

I LIKE IT how u jump to conclusions i just joined here and it seem i already spotted a good poem email me at yahoo deshaniquebrown22@yahoo.com thanks KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK