Two teenagers shot....

by ||*Jekka*||   Apr 13, 2006


Why bother with relationships
when half the time they fail
a few kisses on the lips
his hands on her hips

they love to be with each other
in the parks they love taking long walks
at night they sneak phone calls so they can stay up for hours just to talk

they thought it was true
a few months go by
they stand by each other
hand in hand
side by side
but by that time
they both knew

they couldn't look
each other straight in the eye
they now knew their love had died

all the memories of the past
in their hearts they will forever last

Now shes not so pleasant
she calls calls him a d**sh bag
and he replies you stupid Who**e.

One last argument
who knew it would be the last one
he pulls out a gun
as she sits there and screams
yelling please let me be

he tells her to shut up before her life will flash right before her eyes
and that this is no lie.

she screams some more
he says i warned you you little Who*re.

he turns around sniffs some coke
then grabs her throat and watches her choke.

as she goes into a peaceful sleep
he grabs the gun and places it in her mouth.
he pulled the trigger and whispered pow.

he made a choice
asking himself
why was i a stupid scared boy?!

he remembers the memories
thinking why did i only think about me
he cries till no more tears will fall from his eyes
as he realizes what he's done
he knew this wasn't fun.

he killed his one true love.
even though he had other girls
she was put way above.

He puts the gun to his head
and says God put me to bed.

The next morning
the whole town was shocked.
two teenagers had been shot.

They all wondered what ever happened to that love they shared?
did they even care?!

All these secrets
he took to the grave
as both their lives
were left to fade.

(C) 2006 By:Jessica Esquivel

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    It was a bit odd and too coincidental for me...they all of a sudden cuss and die? a bit out there but the idea and plot was ok..i liked some of the stanzas especially.nice job,
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by â™ innocenceâ™ 

    I love the intensity

    absolutely amazing and it definitly is an eye-opener

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Caity

    This is an amazing poem!! it was intense and a lil spooky! but hey we all know love makes you do the wacky....i felt the emotion and i had a tear in my eye...5/5 good work girl! keep it up! ttyl

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    Wow! That's really good! I got scared for awhile there! you did a great job putting that together and having the reader feel the emotion that was going on. Keep up the good work!