by ||*Jekka*|| Apr 13, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Why bother with relationships |
It was a bit odd and too coincidental for me...they all of a sudden cuss and die? a bit out there but the idea and plot was ok..i liked some of the stanzas especially.nice job, |
I love the intensity |
by Caity
This is an amazing poem!! it was intense and a lil spooky! but hey we all know love makes you do the wacky....i felt the emotion and i had a tear in my eye...5/5 good work girl! keep it up! ttyl |
by Ashley
Wow! That's really good! I got scared for awhile there! you did a great job putting that together and having the reader feel the emotion that was going on. Keep up the good work! |