Wow! That's really good! I got scared for awhile there! you did a great job putting that together and having the reader feel the emotion that was going on. Keep up the good work!

This is an amazing poem!! it was intense and a lil spooky! but hey we all know love makes you do the wacky....i felt the emotion and i had a tear in my eye...5/5 good work girl! keep it up! ttyl

I love the intensity

absolutely amazing and it definitly is an eye-opener

5/5

It was a bit odd and too coincidental for me...they all of a sudden cuss and die? a bit out there but the idea and plot was ok..i liked some of the stanzas especially.nice job,
love ya lots,
sore