Take my broken wings

by Willow   Apr 13, 2006


Take my broken wings
and make them fly again
throught the air so clean.
please set me free.

take my broken wings,
and take them high.
listen as the Angels sing,
but please don't cry.

take my broken wings,
And my pain too.
fly up high with the Angels,
but please remember i love u.

take my broken wings,
and touch the sky.
play with the rainbows,
please go before i cry.

take my broken wings,
and make me smile,
baby be free and wild,
but plesase remember ur my Angel so don't stray too far.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mark Harris

    Aw... That's a sweet poem! Good stuff. Btw, I live in Castlemaine, Victoria. An hour and a half out of Melbourne. You've never heard of it 'cause it's a hole lol. Where 'bouts do you live? Keep it up! xoxo Harris

  • 18 years ago

    by A Fallen Angel

    I dn't care about your spelling mistakes you still get the meaning of the poem even with the mistakes.... they give a poem character... and i loved it.. you sholdnt have gotten a 1.0 on this... it deserves at least a 4 or 5. defiantely a good one... i liked it a lot.

  • 18 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Careful of spelling mistakes ;O)
    Besides that its a beautifully written poem keep it up :o)

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