You expressed your feelings so well through your words. 5/5 awesome!

Hehe, and is there any surprise that you won the contest . . . amazing poem, I can relate almost exactly, so well thought out, the structure, flow, everything just works!

Peace. [Sole]

You can really feel the emotion in this one, and thats what poetry is all about. good work!

I really like the way that you ended this poem. Great job. I'm sure that many people can relate to this (in some way) It's really nicely written & the flow is good & it keeps rhythm well. great job! 5/5*

Another poem of stunning quality, of love and love's loss. What is clear to me reading your poetry is the true depth of the emotion that you feel when you place pen to paper (or fingers to keys...) a sense of hope that pervades everything you write. Truely magnificent 5/5 x

Your words are beautiful. You did well with the year ago and the year waiting. Your final line draws the most attention as it leaves us wanting to know what would come in that year. Your words wash over the reader and leaves them wanting more. And I know that because I've read a couple of your poems.

Good use of words. But in my critique, you can still work on the flow. Keep it up

That last stanza was really good. And also the poem was probablly easy for alot of poeple to relate to. I can relate a little bit. But, The poem itself, Was just brillant. Another awesome piece. Keep up the good work, 5/5

`taleeee xx

Awww.. that is so sweet.. and sad.. this contained so much emotion and you really shared your feelings with us.. i loved this!

Yet you took me pass the limit.
^ here i think you meant "past" not "pass" but maybe im mistaken :)

excellent write! 5/5

Ooh liked this one too.

A year is such a long time isn't it?

joy*:.xx

Loved it! The title was catchy, and the poem alternated between several emotions, like you were actually there, then looking at it,..aww, so nice!

//T.L.//

This is sad!! Such emotion and vulnerability. It is the hardest thing to open up to someone and let yourself be vulnerable!! Great job! 5/5

Wow you really did express everything well... nice job

That was beautiful! I loved your word choice! The flow was really good. I can relate a lot to this. You put a great deal of emotion into this, which always makes the readers want to keep reading. You did a wonderful job!

Cayce x

I love the way u write this one! i feel the emotion and i was thinking im the one who saying all this things. actually i can truly relate this poem coz i was remember someone in my past well,,,, great written keep up the good work5/5

Overall, I like your style, I want to read on and I don't get bored halfway through. The flow was a bit rocky, but it doesn't really affect the content, or the message. Really well done, mature and concise.

Thank you very much for the comment
and i absolutely adore this poem, I can relate to it so much!!!
a definite 5/5

Aww. so sweet and longing yet sad. neva give up hope hun

much love and many kisses,
bex

A nice poem. a good conclusion as well. A story of sadness and love and letting go even when you don't want to. This was very well done and a very nice write. So simple and you just state it like it is.
Charisma*

I liked the ending. and your style. i loved the emotion in it!