Sucks when the friendship has to end...especially when ur feeling that if you had taken control then you would still have that friend...its hard to be friends with girls for me but its harder to KEEP as JUST friends with guys...

Great job 5/5

Nice but some of the flow is off.

Good good its good but not as good as it should

Aw, This is sad! A great poem though, I really love that last line; "I want my friend back" It's so sad, Keep it up though! 5/5

luv natalie x-x