My Problem is

by Danielle   Apr 13, 2006


My problem is that I miss you,

I let it get to me,

I should just ignore it,

like you ignore me,

maybe I should just let you go.

But my heart wont let me forget you,

my head wont let me forget the memories,

It makes me miss you,

I try and I try,

Then I relize you don't care,

I took so much pain for liking you,

and at least you could do is try,

Try to talk to me,

try to be my friend again,

But I guess thats not gunna happen.

Now you have a new life,

forgot about me,

but I never forgot about you,

I wish you would give me the time of day,

But maybe I hurt you to much.

My problem is that I miss you,

I let it get to me,

I should just ignore it,

like you ignore me,

maybe I should just let you go.

By:Danielle To:Randy
written in 2006

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aw wow. Another sad one. Aww Cheer up hun =] I know what it is like to lose a friend. Its hard to get through, But atleast if you's don't talk they will always be in your heart!

    And this was a great peice! I loved it. Keep writing, And smile =] 5/5

    luv natalie x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    I also agree with kaylee. good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Yes i agree completly with Kaylee Rose^ But other than that you did a great job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    The deas were good but it was kind of too repetitive. HOnestly, I think you should limit toa coupel of things and add more imagery. It was a good friendship poem as it was written for someone, I just think if you wanted it to stand out maybe add mroe detail. You could leave it as is to because it seems really personal :)

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