The deas were good but it was kind of too repetitive. HOnestly, I think you should limit toa coupel of things and add more imagery. It was a good friendship poem as it was written for someone, I just think if you wanted it to stand out maybe add mroe detail. You could leave it as is to because it seems really personal :)

Yes i agree completly with Kaylee Rose^ But other than that you did a great job 5/5

I also agree with kaylee. good job!

Aw wow. Another sad one. Aww Cheer up hun =] I know what it is like to lose a friend. Its hard to get through, But atleast if you's don't talk they will always be in your heart!

And this was a great peice! I loved it. Keep writing, And smile =] 5/5

luv natalie x0x