It's cute and the ideas stand out as well as the imagery you're trying to present. It reads a bit akward though so try reading it outloud to yourself. Everything is great, I just think if you reworded it, it could stand out even more.

Aw, This is sweet =] I wish i could find that one special person =[ lol ohwell...
This was another great poem from you, && I hope to see more in the future! Keep it up, && Take care hun x-x

luv natalie

HEART TOUCHING!!!!!!!!!

I loved you poem, i know that feeling all to well and trust me i am neva gonna let him go.

Bravo....and soo cute...i give you 5/5 perfect!

Much love from Jammal

I do know how that feels and im really lucky that ive found that person and im never gona let him go.
your poem was great!!thank you:)
you were able to put into words what a lot of us feel but dont always know how to express...

Very well written =)

This is such a touching poem and so sweet!! I loved it and definatly am going to read more of your work. This line had a little grammer error

and you know their the one for you,

It should be "They're"

Keep on writting!

Awesome poem!!
U kno that feelin when u start reading a poem and its just Great :) hah.

good job!

Awe that's really sweet!
i luv it! ur a great writer!

Wow...i used to know that feeling..not anymore....i love your poem...its pretty good....i like it... i wish that i had that still...i miss that feeling..well keep writing its good!!

*sheds a tear* So sweet....so beautiful....I LOVE THIS POEM!!

Boy do I ever know that feeling!! It's incredible, very much like this poem. You described love so simply but so well to be so simple. Awesome job!

I think this poem is awesome, it made tears swell up in my eyes because it really helped me realize that I made the right decision to stay with my boyfriend even though people have tried to break us up, thanks!!

I loved that!! it was really really great...Poetry doesnt always have to rhyme, and you proved that ...great job!!

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