by PURE HEART Apr 13, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Leaving my hand in the crowded world, |
by UnToLd TrUtH
This is wonderful! |
by Angel
As suprising to anyone i know i can relate quite a bit to this entire poem...i love it and it was a great use of words for creating a picture 5/5 |
Wow so much detailing! loved the poem 5/5 |
by sarah
What a fantastic poem, it flows perfectly and the wording you have used is excellent, thanks for your comment meant alot, keep writing and take care hun Sarah x |
by cLumsy
Ah just reading the second stanza gives me the most frightening chills up my spine, for that is so beautifully terrifying and sorrowful, it reflects upon how I see the world. A heart-melting poem. |