by Sole Apr 13, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
Upon my shelf of memory |
by Alesia
I loved the soul meaning of this poem! I didn't care all that much for the rhyming, I think you could have done better without it. All in all, It was really well penned. 4/5 |
Very good.. Really deep.. Flowed really well.. keep writing! |
by Biscuit
A very deep poem which provokes a lot of thought, nicely written and very imaginative. |
by Shawna
Wow!! I read it twice. It's deep!! It made me think!! Great work!! 5/5 |
I LOVED the last line, great work on this poem. I think this is one of your best! It flowed and rhymed so well, it was flawless. |