I really like the poem. The last bit about walking with the grim reaper is brilliant. Very original layout. thnx for the comment on my poems i hope to see more from you soon

Joe xxx

I really like this a lot, to start with I was a bit unsure but then I read it outloud and really got into the flow of it. I love the layout you have used, and the powerful language. Take care
- Polly x

Its so unexmotional and it feels so real like as if you were there standing and staring but not completely understanding

Good...i like it...besides the cutting...its good...keep it up!
-im cooler than you-

This poem was, well, wow! i really liked it, especially the emding, very good

Thats awsome...really...i like it!

Friggen awsome...absolutly ammazin stuff...keep this up!