That was good. I know exactly how you feel, and i'm sure many others do too! It was good in the beginning, but the last 2 or 3 stanzas were kinda weird. maybe if you changed the wording or something, i just didn't understand at first, but then again, i'm slow. lol But other than that, good job! Love lots, Ashley

Great. I love it. Makes perfect sense now, and it is BEAUTIFUL!!! :) Excellent. I love it...wait, i said that already, well, i do love it!!! :) Great job, and thanks for commenting on my poem, and letting me know about yours! Love lots!--Ash