by And smiles hide everything Apr 13, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
She wanted to be perfect |
A very hearfelt poem, brings lots of emotion to the reader. It had a good flow and a good message to it. |
by ABake
Thats very good.....keep up the good work 5/5 |
by X~Angie~X
Omg wow.. that is so sad. it made me very sad when i read it. cuz i am kinda anorexic. i dont eat much ne more and yea.. but it was very deep adn had lots of emotion put in it.. i hope that this isnt true... cuz if so im sorry. thats so sad.. i really liked this poem tho.. its amazing.. keep writing.. u hve talent..great job.. |
by jessie
Good poem Van, |
by pain is me
This is amazing |