Terrified in the way you make me feel
Like an elephant scared of a mouse
Running away from my fears
Finding my in a little cage
But you are the love of my life
It is a little messed up of a poem but i think that it is a good poem and i would like for you to comment on it to tell what you think about it ... thank you
It is nice, but I think it is a bit short don't you?
it looks more of a quote.
maybe you should think more of the topic, and write a little more.
of coure, thats only what I think.